My tien verse is a variation of a monstich derived from the first line if Chidiock Tichborne 's famous elegy.
A Tien is a one liner(sentence) verse of ten words of ONE syllable, without a title, often pervaded with pathos.
The following examples are my copyright but may be used for educational purposes provided credit thereof is made to me AND an email is forwarded to Strandbg@aol.com
Where to go from here,when truth is so near
We all, may find the Son to light our way
The past,my now,with me each day will stay
and as a sequence
DEMI sonnet a TIEN love sequence
Dear one where have you been,I missed you so
Come here, what can I say to make you stay
Why would you go when love is so near
Pray leave the past , your love can fill this void
Come let us dance in step, close up once more
A hug, a kiss, hold me, tell me you're mine
Let us wed,wear my ring, make this heart sing
